Matayzha's Sep 18th Blog Post

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 Today in class we got into groups, in these groups we had to swap computers or papers, so we were able to proof read or edit the person that's in our groups paper. Though because I missed Monday I had to take time to write my introduction and conclusion paragraphs. 

    From today's lesson I learned the importance of editing and revising, as well as the importance of proof reading, before you hand off your paper to someone else. This essay and the steps we took to complete it will help me when writing for any other core class, especially when I go off to college. 

  I liked today's task, It was fun and peaceful .. as well as very easy. 

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