Matayzha's Sep 13th Blog Post

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 Today in class we worked on writing paragraph 3, after writing this paragraph we revised it and finished any other revisions in the other paragraphs. 

From this lesson I learned how to correctly write a body paragraph while revising and editing. From this lesson I will understand how to fully understand the format for writing and developing an essay. I will also take from this that it is very important to already have what you want to write set up and thought about, other than thinking as you write. 

 

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